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You are organizing a trip to the Snowy mountains in New South Wales for a group of students from Perth in Western Australia. Write to the manager of Student Hostel Services and explain when you want to visit the snowy Mountains, how long you will stay, how many students are in your party, and what accommodation you will require?

You are organizing a trip to the Snowy mountains in New South Wales for a group of students from Perth in Western Australia. Write to the manager of Student Hostel Services and explain when you want to visit the snowy Mountains, how long you will stay, how many students are in your party, and what accommodation you will require? gmnL
Dear Sir, I am writing this to enquire about the accommodation and looking forward to booking the same if found suitable. To explain to you, we are arranging a tour of the Snowy Mountains of New South Wales for the group of students. And this is about to begin in next month for the first two weeks. It's a fourteen days excursion plan and we will be going to have 20 nos. of students from diverse areas of the country. After talking to the administration, I have found that Student Hostel Services are there to provide the required accommodation. Therefore, kindly arrange on the same as per our following requirements. I will be needed to have 11 double rooms on sharing basis, with other amenities such as complimentary breakfast every day, meals included, free wi-fi, sports facilities, transportation rental support, and arrangement of a tour guide if possible. Additionally, do recommend other possible recreational activities. That's all about it, So, kindly confirm the arrangements well in advance, approximately before 10 days, so that I can confirm the plan accordingly. Yours Sincerely, Rinju Chauhan.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this to
enquire
about the accommodation and looking forward to booking the same if found suitable.

To
explain
to you, we are arranging a tour of the Snowy Mountains of New South Wales for the group of students. And this is about to
begin
in
next
month for the
first
two weeks. It's a fourteen days excursion
plan and
we will be going to have 20 nos.
of
students from diverse areas of the country.

After talking to the administration, I have found that Student Hostel Services are there to provide the required accommodation.
Therefore
, kindly arrange on the same as per our following requirements. I will
be needed
to have 11 double rooms on sharing basis, with other amenities such as complimentary breakfast every day, meals included, free
wi-fi
, sports facilities, transportation rental support, and arrangement of a tour guide if possible.
Additionally
, do recommend other possible recreational activities.

That's all about it,
So
, kindly confirm the arrangements well in advance, approximately
before
10 days,
so
that I can confirm the plan
accordingly
.

Yours
Sincerely
,
Rinju
Chauhan.
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IELTS letter You are organizing a trip to the Snowy mountains in New South Wales for a group of students from Perth in Western Australia. Write to the manager of Student Hostel Services and explain when you want to visit the snowy Mountains, how long you will stay, how many students are in your party, and what accommodation you will require?

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