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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy • tell your friend what the event was • explain why you think your friend would like the event • invite them to come to the event with you

You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy • tell your friend what the event was • explain why you think your friend would like the event • invite them to come to the event with you 6nA0
Dear jassi, Hi there, how’re you doing? Anyways, I’m so excited to let you know that I was enjoying an art exhibition program last week and it was amazing. I saw a huge range of paintings on that ground and that was really awesome. As far I know that you have the great qualifications to draw something, and I’ve kept one for my bedroom. How many programs we’ve celebrated at once, it was absolutely interesting and as far I know you’re crazy about the program because you can enjoy your time. By the way, do you remember! We had met with few guys at our last picnic and it was great fun? They all are an artist and they’re coming here on next day, and I believe that you would be enjoying this event. So, you can join us; hope it’s going to be memorable. Anyways, no more today and see you soon at the party. Mehidi
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Hi there, how’re you doing? Anyways, I’m
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so
excited to
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let
you know that I was enjoying an art exhibition program last week and it was amazing. I
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saw
a huge range of paintings on that ground and that was
really
awesome.

As far I know that you have the great qualifications to draw something, and I’ve
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kept
one for my bedroom. How
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many
programs we’ve celebrated at once, it was
absolutely
interesting and as far I know you’re crazy about the program
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because
you can enjoy your time.

By the way, do you remember! We had met with few guys at our last picnic and it was great fun? They all are an
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artist and
they’re coming here on
next
day, and I believe that you would be enjoying this
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event
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So
, you can
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join
us; hope it’s going to be memorable.

Anyways, no more
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today
and
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you
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at the party.

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Mehidi

IELTS letter You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy • tell your friend what the event was • explain why you think your friend would like the event • invite them to come to the event with you

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