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Appologise to your friend for not visiting on his birthday

Appologise to your friend for not visiting on his birthday Bjp9

Dear ali, I hope you are in pink of your health. I would like to wish you happy birthday and best wishes, hope you had a blast with your family and friends. I want to appologise that I couldn't attend your birthday party due to some serious family disputes. I was going through a turmoil and it was very difficult for me to cope up with the pressure and court hearing every other day. I had to meet with the lawyers almost every day to prepare for the courts proceedings regarding the property issue which I had already informed you about before. I never actually forgot about your birthday and I had tried desperately to visit you but the lawyers were not at all supporting and would not allow to delay the meetings. I will try my best to visit you as soon as i pass through these thick and thins and would definitely makeup for it. Forgive me as nothing was under my controll. take care of yourself, your family and friends. Your best friendFahd

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