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You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency.

You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. WQV0

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to enquire about full-time job vacancies in the field of Data Analytics from your agency. I am Akhilesh Paulraj, a recent graduate of the Big Data Analytics program from Georgian College, Barrie. I am a Data Enthusiast and want to build a career in the same. I have an astute mind for recognizing patterns/trends in data. I possess professional proficiency in laguages like shell scripting, python, R and Scala. I am also familiar with cloud architecture, database management, Machine Learning and Applied Artificial Intelligence. I am familiar with the work culture in the field as a result of my major research project. It also gave me an opportunity to understand core components of a real time analytics project. I have a prior experience as an Software Developer and also a Market research Analyst both professions have helped me understand the neccessity of data visualization and their impacts on optimizing decisionmaking. I would be realy grateful if you could get back to me with any job opportunity in the field of Data Analytics. Yours faithfully, Akhilesh Paulraj

Dear Sir/Madam,

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