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Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre; explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community; describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre; explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community; describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes j70M
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my concern about the recent decision by the local council to close 'Bright Sports and Leisure Centre' due to the financial crisis. Most of my family members and my friends are permanent members of the centre since 2016, and we use it mainly to maintain our physique as well for social interaction on daily basis. As soon as the locals heard this news, they approached me and asked me to request you to reconsider your decision. In my neighbourhood, there is an old age home and many oldsters meet everyday in the evening batch (5: 00 pm - 7: 00 pm). Your centre is the only place where they can spend their quality time. Moreover, for kids and adults, this place plays a paramount role in burning calories and creating a special bonding. If the centre shuts down, the stress levels amongst the adults will again increase, resulting ultimately to poor mental well-being. Other than this, the closure will invite many lifestyle diseases in the community. I hope you would re-think about your decision. Yours faithfully, Jay Miller
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my concern about the recent decision by the local council to close 'Bright Sports and Leisure
Centre
' due to the financial crisis. Most of my family members and my friends are permanent members of the
centre
since 2016, and we
use
it
mainly
to maintain our physique
as well
for social interaction on daily basis.

As
soon
as the locals heard this news, they approached me and asked me to request you to reconsider your decision. In my
neighbourhood
, there is an
old
age home and
many
oldsters
meet
everyday
in the evening batch (5: 00 pm
-
7: 00 pm). Your
centre
is the
only
place where they can spend their quality time.
Moreover
, for kids and adults, this place plays a paramount role in burning calories and creating a special bonding.

If the
centre
shuts down, the
stress
levels amongst the adults will again increase, resulting
ultimately
to poor mental well-being. Other than this, the closure will invite
many
lifestyle diseases in the community.

I hope you would re-
think
about your decision.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jay Miller
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IELTS letter Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre; explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community; describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
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