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Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and your letter: a. Invite him/her to a public event in your country. b. Describe the public event. c. Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit.

Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and your letter: a. Invite him/her to a public event in your country. b. Describe the public event. c. Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit. yW0D
Dear Sarah, I hope you are taking good care of yourself in London’s cold weather. I was wondering if you could attend the 42nd International Book Festival with me this year. It will be held from 20-22 May, in Jaipur, Rajasthan. We could also utilize this as a chance to take a break from work and spend time together as well. On the first day, after the inauguration cremony, famous international authors would be giving away the signed copies of their books and interacting with the crowd. The second day involves a fun ‘Book exchange’ activity where readers from all over the world exchange their favourite books with others. The third and final day of the festival has small activities like word puzzles and crossword games planned for everyone followed by prize distribution Since we will be meeting after 2 years, I thought it would be best to stay back for another week and explore Rajasthan. We could go for the famous wildlife safari in Ranthambore, visit royal palaces and monuments in Udaipur and experience their authentic culture and cuisine at Chowkidhani. I hope that we try to avail of this chance to take a breather. Do let me know what you think as I will be waiting for your reply. Warm regards, Aarunima
Dear Sarah,

I hope you are taking
good
care of yourself in London’s
cold
weather. I was wondering if you could attend the 42nd International
Book
Festival with me this year. It will
be held
from 20-22 May, in Jaipur, Rajasthan. We could
also
utilize this as a chance to take a break from work and spend time together
as well
.

On the
first
day, after the inauguration
cremony
,
famous
international authors would be giving away the signed copies of their
books
and interacting with the crowd. The second day involves a fun
‘Book
exchange’ activity where readers from all over the world exchange their
favourite
books
with others. The third and final day of the festival has
small
activities like word puzzles and crossword games planned for everyone followed by prize distribution

Since we will be meeting after 2 years, I
thought
it would be best to stay back for another week and explore Rajasthan. We could go for the
famous
wildlife safari in
Ranthambore
, visit royal palaces and monuments in Udaipur and experience their authentic culture and cuisine at
Chowkidhani
. I hope that we try to avail of this chance to take a breather.

Do
let
me know what you
think
as I will be waiting for your reply.

Warm regards,

Aarunima
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and your letter: a. Invite him/her to a public event in your country. b. Describe the public event. c. Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
213 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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