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There Is A Problem With The Garbage Collection System In Your Area

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Dear Sir I am writing to express my concerns about the poor performance of the rubbish collection system in your community. Earlier they used to come and collect the garbage from homes every day. Now, they come only once a week. Consequently, garbage is piling up in homes and causing stench. We contacted the concerned authorities and they told us to dump the garbage in the garbage bins placed in various parts of the town. This arrangement causes a great deal of difficult to most people. Yet, many people now carry their garbage to the bin. Unfortunately, that does not resolve the issue because the garbage does not get collected from the bins. As a result, they are now overflowing and have become the haven of mosquitoes and fleas. We are quite worried about the health impacts of this. I request you to look into this issue at the earliest. It is time the council hired more people to collect and dispose of garbage. It could also seek the help of locals willing to volunteer. If money is the problem, you could increase the fee charged for collecting garbage from homes. I am sure most residents would not mind paying a higher fee because everyone wants to live in clean surroundings. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Name
Dear Sir

I am writing to express my concerns about the poor performance of the rubbish collection system in your community. Earlier they
used
to
come
and collect the garbage from homes every day.
Now
, they
come
only
once a week.
Consequently
, garbage is piling up in homes and causing stench. We contacted the concerned
authorities and
they
told
us to dump the garbage in the garbage bins placed in various parts of the town. This arrangement causes a great deal of difficult to most
people
.
Yet
,
many
people
now
carry their garbage to the bin. Unfortunately, that does not resolve the issue
because
the garbage does not
get
collected from the bins.
As a result
, they are
now
overflowing and have become the haven of mosquitoes and fleas. We are quite worried about the health impacts of this.

I request you to look into this issue at the earliest. It is time the council hired more
people
to collect and dispose of garbage. It could
also
seek the
help
of locals willing to volunteer. If money is the problem, you could increase the fee charged for collecting garbage from homes. I am sure most residents would not mind paying a higher fee
because
everyone wants to
live
in clean surroundings.

Thank you for your consideration.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely


Name
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IELTS letter There Is A Problem With The Garbage Collection System In Your Area

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  American English
7 paragraphs
225 words
6.5
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