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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to highlight the incorrect details in the International Travel magazine in the article published on 7th of May 2020. It was mentioned in the content that the place of the The Rock Garden is in Zirakpur whereas it is situated in Chandigarh. Your copy of this journal is sold worldwide and it is extremely important to provide the correct information of the tourist destination. This monthly publication might have been read by millions of people who would like to visit the city beautiful. I would like to request you to kindly make this rectification in your next periodical and print this post with the right amendment. Hoping for a kind consideration of this matter. Yours faithfully Aman
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to highlight the incorrect
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details
in the International Travel magazine in the article published on 7th of May 2020.

It
was mentioned
in the content that the place of
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the The
Rock Garden is in
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Zirakpur
whereas it
is situated
in Chandigarh. Your copy of this journal
is sold
worldwide and it is
extremely
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important
to provide the correct information of the tourist destination. This monthly publication might have
been read
by millions of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who would like to visit the city
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
.

I would like to request you to kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
this rectification in your
next
periodical and print this post with the right amendment.

Hoping for a kind consideration of this matter.

Yours
faithfully


Possible spelling mistake found.
Aman
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IELTS letter advertisement about to look after the child

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
125 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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