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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to highlight the incorrect details in the International Travel magazine in the article published on 7th of May 2020. It was mentioned in the content that the place of the The Rock Garden is in Zirakpur whereas it is situated in Chandigarh. Your copy of this journal is sold worldwide and it is extremely important to provide the correct information of the tourist destination. This monthly publication might have been read by millions of people who would like to visit the city beautiful. I would like to request you to kindly make this rectification in your next periodical and print this post with the right amendment. Hoping for a kind consideration of this matter. Yours faithfully Aman

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to highlight the incorrect This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 in the International Travel magazine in the article published on 7th of May 2020.

It was mentioned
 in the content that the place of Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "The" is left.theThe
the The
 Rock Garden is in Possible spelling mistake found.DimapurGorakhpurRaipurTiruppurTirupur
Zirakpur
 whereas it is situated
 in Chandigarh. Your copy of this journal is sold
 worldwide and it is extremely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to provide the correct information of the tourist destination. This monthly publication might have been read
 by millions of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who would like to visit the city This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
.

I would like to request you to kindly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 this rectification in your next
 periodical and print this post with the right amendment.

Hoping for a kind consideration of this matter.

Yours faithfully


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Aman

IELTS letter advertisement about to look after the child

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

125 words

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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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