Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the cours

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the cours X9jq
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you about the computer course for advantage users that I found in an advertisement. In description I noticed that I must had done elementary course before to starting your classes. I want to ask you about exception in my case because I have expereance with computer and learn like a self-education student this subject at home from the internet sources. Unfortunately it was offline cource without any proves that can confirm it I have only expeirence. To get certificate as an advantage user is very importnt for me because I want to change my job and this diploma can help me to improve in live my dreams. If you give me opportunity to confirm my knoweledge in this subject, I will pass exams easily and will be appriciated your decision to make exception for me. Yours fathfully, John Dou
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you about the computer course for advantage users that I found in an advertisement. In
The comma is probably missing here: "description, I".
description I
noticed that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
had done elementary course
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
to starting your classes. I want to ask you about exception in my case
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I have
Possible spelling mistake found.
expereance
with computer and learn like a self-education student this subject at home from the internet sources. Unfortunately it was offline
Possible spelling mistake found.
cource
without any proves that can confirm it I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
Possible spelling mistake found.
expeirence
.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
certificate as an advantage user is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
Possible spelling mistake found.
importnt
for me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
my job and this diploma can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
my dreams.

If you give me opportunity to confirm my
Possible spelling mistake found.
knoweledge
in this subject, I will pass exams
easily
and will be
Possible spelling mistake found.
appriciated
your decision to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
exception for me.

Yours
Possible spelling mistake found.
fathfully
,

John
Possible spelling mistake found.
Dou

IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the cours

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
146 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the cours