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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents.

You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. KRj9

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter in regards to recent advertisement in the Australian magazine mentioning the opportunity for a vacancy for a nanny to look after a six years old child. After coming through this advert, I promptly decided to write to you as I am confident I am suitable for this position and I love children. I have also been taking care of my nephew since he was 3 years old as both my brother and his wife are working. Moreover I have also worked as a Assistant in the Rainbow Pre-School. In addition to this I easily gel with small children and love to play with them. I look forward to hearing from you soon Yours faithfully, Alisa

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".in regard towith regard toregarding
in regards to
 recent advertisement in the Australian magazine mentioning the opportunity for a vacancy for a nanny to look after a six years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 child. After coming through this advert, I promptly
 decided to write to you as I am confident I am suitable for this position and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 children. I have also
 been taking care of my nephew since he was 3 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 as both my brother and his wife are working. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 I have also
 worked as Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 Assistant in the Rainbow Possible spelling mistake found.Preschool
Pre-School
. In addition
 to this I easily
 gel with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 children and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to play with them. I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon


Yours faithfully
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Alisa