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System used for rubbish is not working properly, write a lettercto local authority

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Dear sir or madam, I would like to appreciate your decatE to society and thank you for your service I am writting this lettercto complain you that the community "Well organiser " having a grave matter with litter collectings especially in recent couple of weeks. Firstly, the garbage collectors trucks not reach our scheme regularly owing to that, over -flowing trash bins and wastes scattered around the bins as well as on the road that lead to hampers peace of our lives also impact on health. Not only, uncomfortable to stay with unpleasant odder but also, serious conditions such as dogs and cows are splashing decomposed litter causal foul environment in our neighbourhood. Secondly, with relation to this problems, became breeding ground for mosquitoes as same as houseflies totally destroyed well- being of us. Moreover, gradually boost the trash amount would reach the water stream, if it happened diseases like cholera and diarrhoea might be started. I would like to suggest that installed rubbish bins are not abundant for scheme and great to have sizable bins than using nowadays. Besides that, trash should be collected every other day in time, hectic situations as this would be prevented. I am looking forward to hearing from a great involvement and I hope you will take immediate measures on the matter. Yours Faithfully, G hamini
Dear sir or madam, I would like to appreciate your
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decatE
to society and thank you for your service I am
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writting
this
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lettercto
complain you that the community
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Well
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organiser
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"
having a grave matter with litter
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collectings
especially
in recent couple of weeks.

Firstly
, the garbage collectors trucks not reach our scheme
regularly
owing to that, over -flowing trash bins and wastes scattered around the bins
as well
as on the road that lead to hampers peace of our
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lives
also
impact on health. Not
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only
, uncomfortable to stay with unpleasant odder
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but
also
, serious conditions such as dogs and cows are splashing decomposed litter causal foul environment in our
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neighbourhood
.
Secondly
, with relation to
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this
problems, became breeding ground for mosquitoes as same as houseflies
totally
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destroyed
well- being of us.
Moreover
,
gradually
boost the trash amount would reach the water stream, if it happened diseases like cholera and
Possible spelling mistake. 'diarrhoea' is British English.
diarrhoea
might be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
.

I would like to suggest that installed rubbish bins are not abundant for scheme and great to have sizable bins than using nowadays.
Besides
that, trash should
be collected
every other day in time, hectic situations as this would be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevented
.

I am looking forward to hearing from a great involvement and I hope you will take immediate measures on the matter. Yours
Faithfully
, G
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hamini
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IELTS letter System used for rubbish is not working properly, write a lettercto local authority

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
221 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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