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You are organising a party. Write a letter to your friend inviting her attend the party

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Dear Nodira How are you getting on? I am writing to invite you to the party which is called "My teacher is my proud". I would love it if you could come to this party. It would be held on the first october at 17: 30 on celebration house named after Shokirjon ota. At this party we invite a lot of retired teachers. There will be dancing, singing, funny performance at this party. Also we have delicious dinner. If you come you won't regret. You have recently had a baby. We all miss you. Come and be our nice guest! Looking forward to seeing you then. Love Johanna
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Nodira


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My teacher is my proud
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party
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october
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Shokirjon
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party
we invite
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a lot of
retired teachers. There will be dancing, singing,
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funny
performance at this
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party
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If
you
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come
you won't regret. You have recently had a baby. We all miss you.
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Come
and be our nice guest!

Looking forward to seeing you then.

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Love
Johanna
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IELTS letter You are organising a party. Write a letter to your friend inviting her attend the party

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
107 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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