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I have attached my CV for your reference. Kindly check the file attached for more details.

I have attached my CV for your reference. Kindly check the file attached for more details. 7LVny

Dear Human Resources Department, I have attached my CV for your reference. Kindly check the file attached for more details. I was always interested in the Logistics industry due to perfect matching with my personality and career-oriented. Thus, I must take that exciting opportunity to step out of my comfort zone and pursue a successful career. I am fully aware that I was not naturally talented in any subject and especially not prior experience in the Logistics sector, but I had a strong belief that I would be a great team player and a keen worker who will be able to learn and adapt quickly in the new environment based on several achievements and my working experience over two years. With one aim in my mind, I desire to bring more value to customer satisfaction and maintain the company's service at the highest level possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. If you have any further questions, do not hesitate to contact me.

Dear Human Resources Department,

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I was always interested in the Logistics industry due to perfect matching with my personality and career-oriented. Thus
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 take that exciting opportunity to step out of my comfort zone and pursue a successful career.

I am fully
 aware that I was not naturally
 talented in any subject and especially
 not prior experience in the Logistics sector, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I had a strong belief that I would be a great team player and a keen worker who will be able to learn and adapt quickly
 in the new environment based on several achievements and my working experience over two years. With one aim in my mind, I desire to bring more value to customer satisfaction and maintain the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
's service at the highest level possible.

I am looking forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. If you have any further
 questions, do not hesitate to contact me. 

IELTS letter I have attached my CV for your reference. Kindly check the file attached for more details.

Letter

American English

5 paragraphs

166 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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