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Write an email to all team members (150 words) • Telling them about a big project the team has successful executed • Explaining why this project was so important • Thank each one of them for their participation & contribution • Inform them that there would be small celebration in the office./Each team member is going to receive a Gift voucher of Rs.1500

Write an email to all team members (150 words) • Telling them about a big project the team has successful executed • Explaining why this project was so important • Thank each one of them for their participation & contribution • Inform them that there would be small celebration in the office. /Each team member is going to receive a Gift voucher of Rs. 1500 Wna9D

Hello everyone, I want to congratulate for your achievement and efforts you took for successful delivery of ABC project within a deadline. You might not be aware of that how important this project is for our organization. It’s having a big history before we started working on it. But our whole team did this finally and this recognition award telling everything. Let me quickly recall its background history. Our China team started working on it. No doubt their team technically sounds good. They designed it beautifully from aesthetic point of view but in prototype testing it failed. They run lot of iterations, reverse engineering but the result was not up to the mark. After seeing the deadline, the project status was not satisfactory. So, our Product head decided to handover it our India team and let them find out the root cause of failure. Our team received the incomplete data and our few kicks off meetings decided that we can go with this project. Our positive feedback-built confidence in upper management of our organization. Our Team Lead XYZ prepared the project plan, time schedule and chose the right members to deliver it within a deadline. And we got a successful result after running test trials on prototypes. Finally, there would be a small celebration in the office cafeteria Monday next week and it’s not over yet, each team member is going to receive a Gift voucher of Rs. 1500/- Thanks again team for tremendous efforts.

Hello everyone,

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