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You’ve just been offered a job, but you will not be able to start work on the appointed day

You’ve just been offered a job, but you will not be able to start work on the appointed day PRaqd

Dear Timmy, To be my honours to join ABC company as a software engineer. Unforturally i have some personal difficulty so that may affect the appointed day. Due to the communication issue between my boss and Human resource team. We have incorrectly to mix up the number of annual leave with no pay leave. So that the last day will become 21st of June. When I realized the issue, i was immediately discuss with my boss to confirm any opportunity to continue the last day without any delay. But the Human resource manager would like to follow the company policy. For this case, the way to resolve it will be pay for extra to buy out for the week or wait until the end. I understand that there is no window for your company to pay for this personal mistake. So that i would like to ask for postpone the appointed day to 22nd of June. Your sincerely, Moses Yeung

Dear Timmy,

To be my Possible spelling mistake. 'honours' is British English.honors
honours
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 ABC The singular proper name 'ABC' must be used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "companies", "companied".companiescompanied
company
 as a software engineer. Possible spelling mistake found.UnfortunatelyUnnaturally
Unforturally
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 personal difficulty This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that may affect the appointed day.

Due to the communication issue between my boss and Human resource team. We have incorrectly
 to mix up the number of annual This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 with no pay This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
. “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
So that
 the last day will become 21st of June. When I realized the issue, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 was immediately discuss with my boss to confirm any opportunity to continue the last day without any delay. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 the Human resource manager would like to follow the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 policy. For this case, the way to resolve it will be pay for extra to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 out for the week or wait until the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
.

I understand that there is no window for your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 to pay for this personal mistake. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 that Did you mean "I"?I
i
 would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :solicitrequest
ask for
 postpone the appointed day to 22nd of June.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
sincerely
,

Moses Possible spelling mistake found.Young
Yeung