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write an email to yur friends to give her three tips on healthy eating habits

write an email to yur friends to give her three tips on healthy eating habits G9xX2

How is it going? I heard you are in the process of losing weight so i'm writing this letter to give you three tips in healthy eating habits. To begin with. I highly recommend that you should make a healthy diet plan for yourself. This helps you know where to strart and give yourself the right foods to have effective eating habits. Second, you have to eat only as much food as you needs. Because if you eat too much, your body will take in a lot of unnecessary energy which lead to obesity. Finally, I suggested that you should eat more colourful fruit and vegetable such as brocoli, carrot, watermelon, . . . . Its not only makes you lose weight also have beautiful skinI hope my advices will help you have lealthy eating habitsBest regards,

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