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You are not satisfied with the service offered by your ISP(Internet Service Provider).

You are not satisfied with the service offered by your ISP(Internet Service Provider). JK8jk

Dear Sir or Madam. I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the service I received during a use on your Internet Provider on May 6th. Firstly, I had sent a message for my office at 8: 55, but it was 9 o'clock before it was got. Such a delay seems to me inexcusable. Then, in spite of the fact that I had waited a long hours until one video content was opened. Such a careless service should not be tolerated in the uztelecom which charges such a high prices. I will not be applying to your Internet Service Provider again. I am looking forward to your reply and resolution of this matter. I will wait two weeks before turning to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. Please contact me at the above address or call me on my mobile phone number at 707-7771 Yours faithfully, Tom Hardy.

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service
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use
 on your Internet Provider on May 6th. Firstly
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but
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before
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got
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in spite of
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hours
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. Such a careless You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
 should not be tolerated
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before
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Please
 contact me at the above address or call me on my mobile phone number at 707-7771 Yours faithfully
, Tom Hardy. 