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You are not satisfied with the service offered by your ISP(Internet Service Provider).

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Dear Sir or Madam. I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the service I received during a use on your Internet Provider on May 6th. Firstly, I had sent a message for my office at 8: 55, but it was 9 o'clock before it was got. Such a delay seems to me inexcusable. Then, in spite of the fact that I had waited a long hours until one video content was opened. Such a careless service should not be tolerated in the uztelecom which charges such a high prices. I will not be applying to your Internet Service Provider again. I am looking forward to your reply and resolution of this matter. I will wait two weeks before turning to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. Please contact me at the above address or call me on my mobile phone number at 707-7771 Yours faithfully, Tom Hardy.
Dear Sir or Madam. I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the
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service
I received during a
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use
on your Internet Provider on May 6th.
Firstly
, I had
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sent
a message for my office at 8: 55,
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but
it was 9 o'clock
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before
it was
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got
. Such a delay seems to me inexcusable. Then,
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in spite of
the fact that I had waited a long
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hours
until one video content
was opened
. Such a careless
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service
should not
be tolerated
in the
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uztelecom
which charges such a high prices. I will not be applying to your Internet
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Service
Provider again. I am looking forward to your reply and resolution of this matter.
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I
will wait two weeks
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before
turning to Customer
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Service
Association responsible for this problem.
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Please
contact me at the above address or call me on my mobile phone number at 707-7771 Yours
faithfully
, Tom Hardy.

IELTS letter You are not satisfied with the service offered by your ISP(Internet Service Provider).

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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