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My classmates and my cole friend

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Hi every body. my name is begzod. today i am going to talk about my classmates. May classmates are very good because we are preapere lesson and playing football another. my the closest classmates ahror alisher and javlon. we are very good friends. i have got 33 classmates. they are very smart. my lovely classmates name farangiz. i love it. because she is very beautiful and again beautiful. my friends are very good but girlfriends stupid, joke. i love all classmates.
Hi every body.
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today
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ahror
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IELTS letter My classmates and my cole friend

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  American English
1 paragraphs
81 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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