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My classmates and my cole friend

My classmates and my cole friend x0XB9
Hi every body. my name is begzod. today i am going to talk about my classmates. May classmates are very good because we are preapere lesson and playing football another. my the closest classmates ahror alisher and javlon. we are very good friends. i have got 33 classmates. they are very smart. my lovely classmates name farangiz. i love it. because she is very beautiful and again beautiful. my friends are very good but girlfriends stupid, joke. i love all classmates.
Hi every body.
my
name is
begzod
.
today
i
am going to talk about my
classmates
. May
classmates
are
very
good
because
we are
preapere
lesson and playing football another.
my
the closest
classmates
ahror
alisher
and
javlon
.
we
are
very
good
friends.
i
have
got
33
classmates
.
they
are
very
smart.
my
lovely
classmates
name
farangiz
.
i
love
it.
because
she is
very
beautiful
and again
beautiful
.
my
friends are
very
good
but
girlfriends stupid, joke.
i
love
all
classmates
.
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IELTS letter My classmates and my cole friend

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81 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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