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my friends and i, we're here in Sydney!

my friends and i, we're here in Sydney! JK8Ma

Hi Dear Ali my friends and i, we're here in Sydney! It was warn and suny, we're staying in a house, we rented it for two months, it is a beautiful house there is a big pool and there are two bathrooms and four rooms totally, it is great. We usually go to the restaurant for lunch and dinner because we can't cook, the city has more than fifty night clubs and restaurants. Now, i want to tell a little about Australia's nature Australia has a lot of beautiful jungles, lakes, beaches and mountains. it has a lot of wild animals like Kangroos and tigers. I planning to go to Melbourne next week because i have some friends there, i will visit them, i might go to there by car but my friends said: we're going to go there by air plane. But, before

Hi Dear Ali

my friends and i, we're here in Sydney! It was Consider using a past participle here: "warned".warned
warn
 and Possible spelling mistake found.sunsungsunkSonysunnySung
suny
, we're staying in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, we rented it for two months, it is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 there is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 pool and there are two bathrooms and four rooms totally
, it is great. We usually
 go to the restaurant for lunch and dinner This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 we can't cook, the city has more than fifty night clubs and restaurants.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 about Australia's nature

Australia has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 jungles, lakes, beaches and mountains. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 wild animals like Possible spelling mistake found.Kangaroos
Kangroos
 and tigers.

Did you mean "I'm planning", "I am planning", or "I was planning"?I'm planningI am planningI was planning
I planning
 to go to Melbourne next
 week This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 friends there, Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will visit them, Did you mean "I"?I
i
 might There isn't usually a preposition before "there". Did you mean "go there"?go there
go to there
 by car This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 my friends said: we're going to go there by air This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before