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Write a letter to your friend suggesting him/her to do a job or do higher study

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Dear Priti, Hope you are doing well in this pandemic situation. I got your letter, in which you are asking for my advice regarding your future step. You are confused like other teenagers between higher study and employment. Most institutes focus on conceptual learning. As per my understanding, you are not going to be happy if you choose to do higher study as you are more interested in practical knowledge than theoretical. If you choose to go to college then you will get bored and maybe quit it in the middle. I know you since childhood and based on your interest in doing practical things, getting a job would be a better option for you. In addition, you can help your family financially as they are not in good condition to pay the fee for your higher studies. There are numerous types of jobs in the market but for you to join a software company would be the best choice as you have studied Java language in your secondary school education. It not only helps you to enhance your technical skills but also makes a fair income. I hope, after reading this letter, you would not be in any dilemma and will choose to work in the IT industry. Good luck with your future. Yours Truly, Pooja
Dear
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Priti
,

Hope you are doing well in this pandemic situation. I
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got
your letter, in which you are asking for my advice regarding your future step. You
are confused
like other
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teenagers
between higher study and employment.

Most institutes focus on conceptual learning. As per my understanding, you are not going to be happy if you choose to do higher study as you are more interested in practical knowledge than theoretical. If you choose to go to college then you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
bored and maybe quit it in the middle.

I know you since childhood and based on your interest in doing practical things, getting a job would be a better option for you.
In addition
, you can
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help
your family
financially
as they are not in
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good
condition to pay the fee for your higher studies.

There are numerous types of jobs in the market
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but
for you to
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join
a software
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company
would be the best choice as you have studied Java language in your secondary school education. It not
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only
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helps
you to enhance your technical
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skills
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but
also
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makes
a
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fair
income.

I hope, after reading this letter, you would not be in any dilemma and will choose to work in the IT industry.
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Good
luck with your future.

Yours
Truly
,

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Pooja
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend suggesting him/her to do a job or do higher study

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  American English
8 paragraphs
216 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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