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you are not satisfied with the service in the hotel.Write a letter to the hotel manager in your city..What the problem is. our city

you are not satisfied with the service in the hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager in your city. . What the problem is. our city jdgOM
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to complain about the hotel in our city. I recently stayed in your hotel on may 21st. In fact, I expected a better service from the hotel but i was not what i waited. I was shocked by the standart of food and accommodation. the rooms were very small and dirty unlike. What is ore, there was no private bathroom in the hotel. The food on the hotel was very unsatisfactory. I hope to hear from you regarding this matter as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, XYZ
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to complain about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
in our city. I recently stayed in your
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hotel
on
The month "May" needs to be capitalized.
may
21st. In fact, I
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expected
a better service from the
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hotel
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but
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was not what
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waited. I
was shocked
by the
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standart
of food and accommodation.
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the
rooms were
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very
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small
and dirty unlike. What is ore, there was no private bathroom in the
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hotel
. The food on the
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hotel
was
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very
unsatisfactory. I hope to hear from you regarding this matter as
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soon
as possible. Yours
faithfully
,
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XYZ

IELTS letter you are not satisfied with the service in the hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager in your city. . What the problem is. our city

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  American English
1 paragraphs
95 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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