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Every year your company organizes a sports event for a local community, but this year they can’t do it. Write a letter to your local newspaper about this. In your letter – Express your feelings about missing the sports event – Tell them about your plans for next year – Explain how this sports event is useful.

Every year your company organizes a sports event for a local community, but this year they can’t do it. Write a letter to your local newspaper about this. In your letter – Express your feelings about missing the sports event – Tell them about your plans for next year – Explain how this sports event is useful. A3xRn
Dear Sir, I am Trupti Khetan, working in Barclays Technology Solution. As you know, our company organizes a sports event every year. This year, we are not able to organize the same due to the Pandemic. I feel very sad that we are not able to organize the event. However, considering the safety of everyone and also due to government norms, we are not able to do so. I was very excited to meet you all and watch you play. I promise that next year we will organize the event on a very large scale. I have also developed some plans for the same. Firstly, we will also ask other companies to join the event so that it can be more fun and also we can collect more and more funds. Secondly, we will organize the event in the stadium so that many people can come and visit the same. This sports event has always been useful because it not only allows the local community to showcase their talent but also collects funds that are useful for the noble cause. Thanks for the consideration. Yours Faithfully, Trupti Khetan
Dear Sir,

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norms, we are not able to do
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on a
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has always been useful
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Thanks for the consideration.

Yours
Faithfully
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IELTS letter Every year your company organizes a sports event for a local community, but this year they can’t do it. Write a letter to your local newspaper about this. In your letter – Express your feelings about missing the sports event – Tell them about your plans for next year – Explain how this sports event is useful.

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