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My Music, My Lifetime and My Heartfelt Letter to You.

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Dear Afroricky, I hope you’re still on the road to the gold. I write you this letter with all depths of inspiration and understanding of your life and the time in which you find yourself at the moment, the daily thoughts, the insecurities, the pain and sometimes sorrow you face all because you haven’t arrived at the gold. They say time heals, they also say time is all it takes to get there. I hope within this time and phase of your life you’re actually doing both of them. I hope you’re healing and pushing strong. In the right time, the world is going to hear about Afroricky and your message shall be passed along with all its essence and purpose. Ride on Afroricky.
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in which you find yourself at the moment, the daily thoughts, the insecurities, the pain and
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time
heals, they
also
say
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is all it takes to
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get
there. I hope within this
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and phase of your life you’re actually doing both of them. I hope you’re healing and pushing strong. In the right
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, the world is going to hear about
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Afroricky
and your message shall
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along with all its essence and purpose. Ride on
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IELTS letter My Music, My Lifetime and My Heartfelt Letter to You.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
124 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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