Dear Sir,
I am Trupti Khetan, working in Barclays Technology Solution. As you know, our company organizes a sports event every year. This year, we are not able to organize the same due to the Pandemic.
I feel very sad that we are not able to organize the event. However, considering the safety of e...
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Dear Afroricky, I hope you’re still on the road to the gold. I write you this letter with all depths of inspiration and understanding of your life and the time in which you find yourself at the moment, the daily thoughts, the insecurities, the pain and sometimes sorrow you face all because you haven’t arrived at the gold. They say time heals, they also say time is all it takes to get there. I hope within this time and phase of your life you’re actually doing both of them. I hope you’re healing and pushing strong. In the right time, the world is going to hear about Afroricky and your message shall be passed along with all its essence and purpose. Ride on Afroricky.
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