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you are not happy with the course you are doing at the college, what is the course, why is it difficult, what course you would like to change to?

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Dear Mr. Carell, I am writing with regard to the elective subjects list I submitted earlier, I would like to do some alterations since I am finding some difficulties continuing the physics course. As you know, the physics course started two weeks ago and after attending some classes, I found it challenging and difficult and not easy to be understood. When I first joined the course, I was enjoying the lab classes that involved experiments and relating them to facts, but when we moved to the theoretical part, I was overwhelmed with terms, rules, and numbers that were not easy for me to digest. Therefore, I would like to replace the physics course with chemistry, since I used to like its classes at the high school and I was achieving high grades. I would be grateful if you can help me, and please do not hesitate to contact me to discuss further. Yours sincerely, Amr Masoud

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some
 alterations since I am finding This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 difficulties continuing the physics course.

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started
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some
 classes, I found it challenging and difficult and not easy to be understood
.

When I first
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joined
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but
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moved
 to the theoretical part, I was overwhelmed
 with terms, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
, and numbers that were not easy for me to digest.

Therefore
, I would like to replace the physics course with chemistry, since I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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school and
 I was achieving high grades.

I would be grateful if you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 do not hesitate to contact me to discuss further
.

Yours sincerely
,

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