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Letter to a friend thanking them for a wonderful stay

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Dear Sam and Thomas, Hope this letter finds you well. I’m writing this letter to thank you for the wonderful pictures you sent in the post, which I received today morning. I can’t thank you enough for such a great holiday and the time we spent together. You both are amazing hosts and I thoroughly enjoyed my vacation staying at your place in London. Sorry, I couldn’t write to you earlier as I was busy completing my last semester’s assignments. You might remember me telling you about the additional subjects, I am studying in the University. The assignments were supposed to be submitted earlier than I thought and I was behind the schedule a bit. Anyways, all sorted now and I’m free from the studies for next 2 months. Why don’t you come over to my place in India for a holiday? There are so many great placed to visit. I would look forward to your response. See you soon. Warm regards Harriet
Dear Sam and Thomas,

Hope this letter finds you well. I’m writing this letter to thank you for the wonderful pictures you
sent
in the post, which I received
today morning
.

I can’t thank you
enough
for such a great holiday and the time we spent together. You both are amazing hosts and I
thoroughly
enjoyed my vacation staying at your place in London.

Sorry, I couldn’t write to you earlier as I was busy completing my last semester’s assignments. You might remember me telling you about the additional subjects, I am studying in the University. The assignments
were supposed
to
be submitted
earlier than I
thought and
I was behind the schedule a bit.

Anyways, all sorted
now
and I’m free from the studies for
next
2 months. Why don’t you
come
over to my place in India for a holiday? There are
so
many
great placed to visit.

I would look forward to your response.
See
you
soon
.

Warm regards

Harriet
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IELTS letter Letter to a friend thanking them for a wonderful stay

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
162 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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