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ou live in a room in a collage. there is a problem in the bathroom that you would like to repair.

ou live in a room in a collage. there is a problem in the bathroom that you would like to repair. 1VqqW
Dear Sir This is Motasem saeed, first year science student. I have teneted the 309 room in williom sepone holl residence. I am witting you this letter to complain about a problem im my bathroom. I would like you to know that for over a week there is no hot water in my bathroom, and the water comes out the shower is brown color, which is a extermely unconvenient situation for me. As this issue has been goining on, I have to use my classmates bathroom to have a daily shower which causes me a lot of problems such as wasting valuable time and feeling embarrassed. At wenesday 20Feb from 8Am to 3Pm, I will be avalible at my room awaiting for the plumber to fix the batroom the mentioned issues. I am looking froward to your response and cooperation. your faitfully
Dear Sir

This is
Motasem
saeed
,
first
year science student. I have
teneted
the 309 room in
williom
sepone
holl
residence. I am witting you this letter to complain about a problem
im
my bathroom.

I
would like you to know that for over a week there is no hot water in my bathroom, and the water
comes
out the shower is brown color, which is
a
extermely
unconvenient
situation for me.

As this issue has been
goining
on, I
have to
use
my classmates bathroom to have a daily shower which causes me
a lot of
problems such as wasting valuable time and feeling embarrassed.

At
wenesday
20Feb from 8Am to
3Pm
, I will be
avalible
at my room
awaiting for
the plumber to
fix
the
batroom
the mentioned issues.

I am looking
froward
to your response and cooperation.

your
faitfully
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IELTS letter ou live in a room in a collage. there is a problem in the bathroom that you would like to repair.

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  American English
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141 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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