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wan to discontinue your club membership, what type of membership, why you want to cancel, how you benefited from the club

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Dear Mr. Allan, I am Amr Masoud, a member of Lava club, I am to request membership cancellation by end of this month September 2021. I have been a silver member since I joined the club three years ago, and I used to pay my annual membership fees in 4 installments every 3 months, this membership type gave an access to most of the club facilities, but unfortunatly I had no access to the olympic pool which I loved to try. Over the period I have been a member, I enjoyed the most playing football and swimming, I joined the club's first team in the city cup competition and achieved the third place last year. Although I considered the club as my second home, but I have to cancel my membership as I am moving from the city to Newyork. My company has shut down there office here and shifted all the stuff to the headquarter. I look forward to hearing from you soon, and please let me know if any paperwork needs to be filled. Yours sincerely, Amr Masoud

Dear Mr. Allan,

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Masoud
, a member of Lava You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
, I am to request You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenrollmentparticipation
membership
 cancellation by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of this month September 2021.

I have been a silver member since I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatedfused
joined
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
 three years ago, and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to pay my annual You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenrollmentparticipation
membership
 fees in 4 installments every 3 months, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenrollmentparticipation
membership
 type gave Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "access".access
an access
 to most of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
 facilities, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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unfortunatly
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 pool which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 to try.

Over the period I have been a member, I enjoyed the most playing football and swimming, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatedfused
joined
 the club's first
 team in the city cup competition and achieved the third place last year.

Although I considered the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
 as my second home, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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have to
 cancel my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenrollmentparticipation
membership
 as I am moving from the city to Possible spelling mistake found.NetworkNewarkNewportNewbornReworkWeWork
Newyork
. My This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 has shut down there office here and shifted all the stuff to the The word 'headquarter' is a verb. The noun to describe a corporate head office ends with an 's'.headquarters
headquarter
.

I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know if any paperwork needs to be filled
.

Yours sincerely
,

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Amr
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Masoud