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I am writing to refer Ms harry to your care as she has been diagnosed with left lung resection and need further care and management for a speedy recovery. Initially, she had pneumonia which has been treated with antibiotic therapy and ventilation. Subsequently, commenced fluid management, oxygen therapy, nutritional support, and physiotherapy. She has difficulties in walking as well as facing difficulties to cope up. Her medical history reveals that she had breast cancer and underwent a full mastectomy in 1988. Moreover, she responded well to the treatment. In 2009, she was diagnosed with small patches in her left lung. Socially, she has been recently migrated to Canada and lives in a small, rented house. Currently, she is facing problems with her visa and her children are supporting her. As per the discharge plan, it would be greatly appreciated if you could adhere to the physiotherapy regime and monitor her medication. Please note that she is on antibiotics-tamoxifen. Kindly encourage her to mobilize. Also, please arrange psychiatrist visits to teach her coping strategies. Ensure smooth visits between her daughters and psychiatrist. Worthy of note: her chemotherapy appointment will begin on6/6/9 at flinder medical centre. Thank you in anticipation for agreeing to take over ms, . marry form this point
I am writing to refer Ms harry to your care as she has
been diagnosed
with
left
lung resection and need
further
care and management for a speedy recovery.

Initially
, she had pneumonia which has
been treated
with antibiotic therapy and ventilation.
Subsequently
, commenced fluid management, oxygen therapy, nutritional support, and physiotherapy. She has difficulties in walking
as well
as facing difficulties to cope up.

Her medical history reveals that she had breast cancer and underwent a full mastectomy in 1988.
Moreover
, she responded well to the treatment. In 2009, she
was diagnosed
with
small
patches in her
left
lung.
Socially
, she has been recently migrated to Canada and
lives
in a
small
, rented
house
.
Currently
, she is facing problems with her visa and her children are supporting her.

As per the discharge plan, it would be
greatly
appreciated if you could adhere to the physiotherapy regime and monitor her medication.
Please
note that she is on antibiotics-tamoxifen. Kindly encourage her to mobilize.
Also
,
please
arrange psychiatrist visits to teach her coping strategies. Ensure smooth visits between her daughters and psychiatrist. Worthy of note: her chemotherapy appointment will
begin
on6/6/9 at
flinder
medical
centre
.

Thank you in anticipation for agreeing to take over ms
, .
marry
form this
point
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IELTS letter write a letter to nurse regarding transfer

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  American English
5 paragraphs
208 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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