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you have injured yourself and you are resting at home. your office colleague send you cards. write a letter to thanks them - thank them for cards - describe how you spend your time - describe your process of recovery

you have injured yourself and you are resting at home. your office colleague send you cards. write a letter to thanks them - thank them for cards - describe how you spend your time - describe your process of recovery dpjlP
Dear Emily, I am writing to you to thank for the care and effort you took to send those lovely cards to me, it means a lot to me. It shows how important person that you are in my life. Since I injured my leg last week, I could not move out of my bed. I always spend time thinking about what we had come through in the past few months in work. I found that, even though pandemic affected all of us, we have done great job in terms of our creating something out of box, working as a pack, delivery something that sets benchmark to our peers. I hope we will bounce back strongly hereafter. Although my leg still pains, doctor is happy with my health process. I have to do one more scanning in coming week and doctor will make a call from there if we need to do take further rest. I will keep you posted. Thanks again for your nice messages in the cards, looking forward to see you soon. Take care and stay safe. Yours lovingly Rowther Gani
Dear Emily,

I am writing to you to thank for the care and effort you took to
send
those lovely cards to me, it means a lot to me. It
shows
how
important
person that you are in my life.

Since I injured my leg last week, I could not
move
out of my bed. I always spend time thinking about what we had
come
through in the past few months in work. I found that,
even though
pandemic
affected
all of us, we have done great job in terms of our creating something out of box, working as a pack, delivery something that sets benchmark to our peers.
I
hope we will bounce back
strongly
hereafter.

Although my leg
still
pains, doctor is happy with my health process. I
have to
do one more scanning in coming week and doctor will
make
a call from there if we need to do take
further
rest. I will
keep
you posted.

Thanks again for your nice messages in the cards, looking forward to
see
you
soon
.

Take care and stay safe.

Yours
lovingly


Rowther
Gani
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IELTS letter you have injured yourself and you are resting at home. your office colleague send you cards. write a letter to thanks them - thank them for cards - describe how you spend your time - describe your process of recovery

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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