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You are moving home. Write a letter to your neighbours to say goodbye to them and to thank for their help during your stay. In your letter Explain how they helped you. - Say what you will miss the most about the area where you lived - Invite them to visit you at your new home.

You are moving home. Write a letter to your neighbours to say goodbye to them and to thank for their help during your stay. In your letter Explain how they helped you. - Say what you will miss the most about the area where you lived - Invite them to visit you at your new home. b3JGg
Dear Jagtar, My job transferred to Chandigarh last week, therefore I have to shift over there from Garhi Tarkhana. I enjoyed your company alot due to your guidance and help in various domestic as well as professional tasks. I can’t forget your contribution and management skills during arranging my birthday party. It could be impossible for me to arrange such a huge party without your help. I always miss the peace of living in your neighbourhood in such a crowded city. The most loving thing I am gona miss in future will be the cake baked by your mother in the home bakery. Lastly, I am moving this Tuesday to Chandigarh. I invite you along with your family for dinner on this saturday at my new apartment in Sector 12 Chandigarh to make a good get together. Warm wishes to your mother and don’t forget to bring my lovely nephew along with you. Looking forward to seeing you soon this Tuesday. Your lovely friend, Manpreet Singh
Dear
Jagtar
,

My job transferred to Chandigarh last week,
therefore
I
have to
shift over there from
Garhi
Tarkhana
. I enjoyed your
company
alot
due to your guidance and
help
in various domestic
as well
as professional tasks.

I can’t forget your contribution and management
skills
during arranging my birthday party. It could be impossible for me to arrange such a huge party without your
help
. I always miss the peace of living in your
neighbourhood
in such a crowded city. The most loving thing I am
gona
miss in future will be the cake baked by your mother in the home bakery.

Lastly
, I am moving this Tuesday to Chandigarh. I invite you along with your family for dinner on this
saturday
at my new apartment in Sector 12 Chandigarh to
make
a
good
get
together.

Warm wishes to your mother and don’t forget to bring my lovely nephew along with you.

Looking forward to seeing you
soon
this Tuesday.

Your lovely friend,

Manpreet
Singh
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IELTS letter You are moving home. Write a letter to your neighbours to say goodbye to them and to thank for their help during your stay. In your letter Explain how they helped you. - Say what you will miss the most about the area where you lived - Invite them to visit you at your new home.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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