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Write an email/ a letter (120-150 words) to your English pen friend – John to tell him about some changes in your local areas during the Covid 19 pandemic.

Write an email/ a letter (120-150 words) to your English pen friend – John to tell him about some changes in your local areas during the Covid 19 pandemic. o5X03
Dear John, How are you doing? I hope that you and your family will be fine during this harsh time of Covid. Due to the pandemic, I came back to live with my parents at my hometown and the last few months have been crazy for us since there were some cases positive to virus in my town. So, I’m writing this letter to tell you about some changes in my local area during the pandemic. The first and most obvious change is that people are out on the streets a lot less than before. To avoid contact with others, they are advised to stay indoors and only go out if necessary. Schools are closed and teaching is online. Restaurants and cafes are not allowed to eat directly, but only take away. Moreover, people's habits have been changed dramatically. Many people have to give up the habit of shaking hands when meeting to avoid spreading the disease. Those who used to get up early to run and exercise now have to switch to exercising at home. People also have a healthier diet, with the desire to increase resistance to be able to fight the virus. In addition, instead of going to the market every day to buy fresh food for cooking, people are now only allowed to go to the market on fixed days of the week to limit the gathering of people. Although these may seem inconvenient, I think they all are necessary to protect the health of each individual and the whole community. How about you? Tell me about life where you live during the pandemic. Hopefully one day, when the pandemic is over, we will meet again. Looking forward to hearing from you soon! Best regards, T
Dear John,

How are you doing? I hope that you and your family will be fine during this harsh time of
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
Covid
. Due to the pandemic, I came back to
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live
with my parents at my hometown and the last few months have been crazy for us since there were
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some
cases
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positive
to virus in my town.
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So
, I’m writing this letter to
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tell
you about
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some
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changes
in my local area during the pandemic.

The
first
and most obvious
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change
is that
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people
are out on the streets a lot less than
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before
. To avoid contact with others, they
are advised
to stay indoors and
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only
go out if necessary. Schools
are closed
and teaching is online. Restaurants and
'cafes' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "cafés"
cafes
are not
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allowed
to eat
directly
,
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but
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only
take away.
Moreover
,
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people
's habits have been
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changed
dramatically
.
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Many
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people
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have to
give up the habit of shaking hands when meeting to avoid spreading the disease. Those who
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used
to
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get
up early to run and exercise
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now
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have to
switch to exercising at home.
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People
also
have a healthier diet, with the desire to increase resistance to be able to fight the virus.
In addition
,
instead
of going to the market every day to
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buy
fresh food for cooking,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are
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now
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only
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allowed
to go to the market on
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fixed
days of the week to limit the gathering of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. Although these may seem inconvenient, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
they all are necessary to protect the health of each individual and the whole community.

How about you?
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Tell
me about life where you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
during the pandemic.
Hopefully
one day, when the pandemic is over, we will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
again. Looking forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
!

Best regards,

T
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IELTS letter Write an email/ a letter (120-150 words) to your English pen friend – John to tell him about some changes in your local areas during the Covid 19 pandemic.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
289 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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