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You are looking for part-time employment. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: • give details about your professional experience and qualifications • explain what type of work you are looking for • say how they can contact you and when you would be available to start work.

You are looking for part-time employment. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: • give details about your professional experience and qualifications • explain what type of work you are looking for • say how they can contact you and when you would be available to start work. 2bx9o
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in any part-time jobs available which my profile fits. Enclosed with thise letter is my resume, with further details of my previous experience and qualifications. Currently, I am enrolled in hospitality at the Red Valley community college, in the past I have worked for a few years at the Bay Restaurant as a waiter and cashier. Additionally, I have some experience in the kitchen as well, I have helped the head chef of Columbia Bistrô during my last vacation time. I would appreciate if you have any opportunities in restaurants or hotels because I need to gather different experiences in my field so when I graduate I would be able to choose wisely where to begin. I can be reached during business hours at my e-mail dieego_gutierrez@hotmail. com or after 5 p. m. at my cell phone 555-12345678. Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meet you in the near future. Your faithfully, Diego Gutierrez.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in any part-time jobs available which my profile fits. Enclosed with
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thise
letter is my resume, with
further
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details
of my previous experience and qualifications.

Currently
, I
am enrolled
in hospitality at the Red Valley community college, in the past I have worked for a few years at the Bay Restaurant as a waiter and cashier.
Additionally
, I have
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some
experience in the kitchen
as well
, I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
the head chef of Columbia
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Bistrô
during my last vacation time.

I would appreciate if you have any opportunities in restaurants or hotels
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because
I need to gather
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
experiences in my field
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
when I graduate I would be able to choose
wisely
where to
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begin
.

I can
be reached
during business hours at my e-mail
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dieego
_
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gutierrez@hotmail
.
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com
or after 5 p. m. at my cell phone 555-12345678.

Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you in the near future.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
,

Diego Gutierrez.
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IELTS letter You are looking for part-time employment. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: • give details about your professional experience and qualifications • explain what type of work you are looking for • say how they can contact you and when you would be available to start work.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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