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Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, give details of the last repair work what the problems are now how you would like the landlord to solve these problems

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Dear Mr Brown, I am writing to inform you about several issues in the apartment that I am renting; however, they should be fixed as soon as possible. It is known that the last renovation and some additional minor cosmetic repairs were made about three years ago. Now, there is a fascinating all-new kitchen with these shiny white cabinets and a marble countertop, much better than the old one. However, But yesterday, I suddenly noticed a puddle in this marvelous kitchen. Much to my disappointment, I discovered that the faucet was is leaking, and that the water from it had damaged the cabinet's facade, and, as a result, it had got ruined. In the light of this annoying occasion, perhaps it would be possible to fix the tap by calling a plumber. In addition, the cabinet facade needs is need to be replaced with a new one or to be restored somehow by a carpenter because of its inappropriate view. I look forward to hearing from you. / I hope you will address this issue as soon as possible. Sincerely Yours, Lina Sidorova
Dear Mr Brown,

I am writing to inform you about several issues in the apartment that I am renting;
however
, they should be
fixed
as
soon
as possible.

It
is known
that the last renovation and
some
additional minor cosmetic repairs
were made
about three years ago.
Now
, there is a fascinating all-new kitchen with these shiny white cabinets and a marble countertop, much better than the
old
one.

However
,
But
yesterday, I
suddenly
noticed a puddle in this marvelous kitchen. Much to my disappointment, I discovered that the faucet was is leaking, and that the water from it had damaged the cabinet's facade, and,
as a result
, it had
got
ruined.

In the light of this annoying occasion, perhaps it would be possible to
fix
the tap by calling a plumber.
In addition
, the cabinet facade needs
is need
to
be replaced
with a new one or to
be restored
somehow by a carpenter
because
of its inappropriate view.

I look forward to hearing from you. / I hope you will address this issue as
soon
as possible.

Sincerely
Yours,

Lina
Sidorova
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, give details of the last repair work what the problems are now how you would like the landlord to solve these problems

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
182 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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