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YOU ARE LIVING IN UNIVERSITY RESIDENCE AND YOU HAVE PROBLEM WITH HIGH LEVEL OF

YOU ARE LIVING IN UNIVERSITY RESIDENCE AND YOU HAVE PROBLEM WITH HIGH LEVEL OF QLKWx

Dear sir, I am writing this letter to bring to your notice the extreme level of disturbance caused by new restaurant opened locally. Let me explain the situation, the new eatery is located beside the student house. It has musical theme therefore, they play music till late night. They have live concerts as well more often due to which they turn the volume high. As of exagerated noise not only me but other students as well are not able to concentrate on their studies and are getting hard time completing our assignments. In addition to this, last week I had my test for which I did not get a chance to study Therefore, I scored a lower grade. Final term exams are starting from next week and I am afraid that if this goes like same It might affect my academic report. Lastly, My suggestion would be to either make this restaurant noise free after 10pm or change the operating hours accordingly. I thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Kaur

Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to bring to your notice the extreme level of disturbance caused by new restaurant opened locally
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 the situation, the new eatery is located
 beside the student This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. It has musical theme therefore
, they play music till late night. They have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 concerts as well
 more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 due to which they turn the volume high.

As of Possible spelling mistake found.exaggerated
exagerated
 noise not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 other students as well
 are not able to concentrate on their studies and are getting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 time completing our assignments. In addition
 to this, last week I had my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 for which I did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a chance to study Therefore
, I scored a lower grade. Final term exams are starting from next
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week and
 I am afraid that if this goes like same It might affect my academic report.

Lastly
, My suggestion would be to either This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 this restaurant noise free after 10pm or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the operating hours accordingly
.

I thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely
,

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Kaur