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Application letter for working as a shop assistant.

Application letter for working as a shop assistant. JlEr0
Dear sir/madam. I am writing this letter to apply for the position of a manager at your company which was advertised in yesterday’s edition of “Uzbekistan today”. I am twenty-four years old and I feel I have five years experience and a large number of essential qualifications needed for this job. Last five years I worked as a manager of the hotel “ Five stars”. I am proactive and able to handle an amount of multiple tasks simultaneously. Moreover I can speak English and Russian without any problems besides that currently I am participating computer courses. As a consequence of knowing computer programs not only I can work as a manager but also able to do work on cashier. I enjoy several outdoor and indoor activities such as planting flowers and knitting in addition to this I go in for sports especially swimming. I am sociable furthermore I get on well every new person. If you take a time I would be grateful any time convenient for you I go to interview as a member of your company. I am looking forward to hearing good news soon. Yours faithfully Jonny Depth.
Dear sir/madam. I am writing this letter to apply for the position of a manager at your
company
which
was advertised
in yesterday’s edition of “Uzbekistan
today
”. I am twenty-four years
old
and I feel I have five years experience and
a large number of
essential qualifications needed for this job. Last five years I worked as a manager of the hotel
Five stars”. I am proactive and able to handle an amount of multiple tasks
simultaneously
.
Moreover
I can speak English and Russian without any problems
besides
that
currently
I am participating computer courses. As a consequence of knowing computer programs not
only
I can work as a manager
but
also
able to do work on cashier. I enjoy several outdoor and indoor activities such as planting flowers and knitting
in addition
to this I go in for sports
especially
swimming. I am sociable
furthermore
I
get
on well every new person. If you take a time I would be grateful any time convenient for
you
I go to interview as a member of your
company
. I am looking forward to hearing
good
news
soon
. Yours
faithfully
Jonny Depth.
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IELTS letter Application letter for working as a shop assistant.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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