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Write a letter to a penfriend

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Dear Anindita Hope you are having a good day! I'm writing in as my teacher has advised me to connect with you as a penfriend. I live in the beautiful city of Pune and work as an IT manager. My day to day work involves intercating with customers from around the globe and offering them services and suggestions to improve their virtual environments. During my off hours, I love to play a few games online and chit chat with my wife. We have a lot in uncommon so it creates a huge space for us to blabber randomly about any topic, and not worry about the conclusion it gets to. While these are some of my indoor ways to get by the time, as an avid reader and explorer, I do like to go on occassional drives and hikes in and around the city away from all the hustle and bustle. I enjoy playing football with my colleagues and it gives me immense pleasure to defend an attack coming in; no nonsense clearance is what I look forward to, in all of my matches. I do not like losing at all, in any aspect of life which is why I always have a way around to correct myself and look for better opprotunities to hone my existing skills and build the ones I lack. Now, I would like to know something about you along the similar lines, and want to get to know you better by each passing letter. I will look forward to hear from you. Thank you Arnab
Dear
Anindita


Hope you are having a
good
day! I'm writing in as my teacher has advised me to connect with you as a penfriend.

I
live
in the
beautiful
city of Pune and work as an IT manager. My
day to day
work involves
intercating
with customers from around the globe and offering them services and suggestions to
improve
their virtual environments. During my off hours, I
love
to play a few games online and
chit chat
with my wife. We have a lot in uncommon
so
it creates a huge space for us to blabber
randomly
about any topic, and not worry about the conclusion it
gets
to.

While these are
some
of my indoor ways to
get
by the time, as an avid reader and explorer, I do like to go on
occassional
drives and hikes in and around the city away from all the hustle and bustle. I enjoy playing football with my colleagues and it gives me immense pleasure to defend an attack coming in; no nonsense clearance is what I look forward to, in all of my matches. I do not like losing at all, in any aspect of life which is why I always have a way around to correct myself and look for better
opprotunities
to hone my existing
skills
and build the ones I lack.

Now
, I would like to know something about you along the similar lines, and want to
get
to know you better by each passing letter.

I will look forward
to hear
from you.

Thank you

Arnab
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a penfriend

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
259 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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