Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest to get registered to your employment agency as I am looking for a suitable part-time job. I am hoping you would enlist me in your database and notify me of suitable job announcements and forward my resume to prospective employers.
I am Hansen Lee, an international student at the University of Westminster and my major is Business Administration. I am originally from Japan and will be staying in London for the next couple of years. To support my education cost and to gain some job experience, I am seeking a suitable part-time position.
I can work as an administrative assistant, customer experience manager or as a salesperson in a retail shop. I can spare time from 4. 30 pm onwards on weekdays and full-time on weekends.
I have previously worked as a customer support officer in a call centre in Japan and as a sales executive in a superstore in London. I have attached my Curriculum Vitae with this letter for your kind consideration which further details my education and work experience.
I look forward to hearing from you with the details process to register with your job agency. Thank you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Hansen Lee
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest to
get
registered to your employment agency as I am looking for a suitable part-time
job
. I am hoping you would enlist me in your database and notify me of suitable
job
announcements and forward my resume to prospective employers.
I
am Hansen Lee, an international student at the University of Westminster and my major is Business Administration.
I
am
originally
from Japan and will be staying in London for the
next
couple of years. To support my education cost and to gain
some
job
experience, I am seeking a suitable part-time position.
I can work as an administrative assistant, customer experience manager or as a salesperson in a retail shop. I can spare time from 4. 30 pm onwards on weekdays and full-time on weekends.
I have previously worked as a customer support officer in a call
centre
in Japan and as a sales executive in a superstore in London. I have attached my Curriculum Vitae with this letter for your kind consideration which
further
details
my education and work experience.
I
look forward to hearing from you with the
details
process to register with your
job
agency. Thank you in advance.
Yours
faithfully
,
Hansen Lee
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