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answering to advertisement about improving memory

Dear sir or madamI saw your advertisement. I am 29 years old. I am master of degree in mechanical engineering. I have some problem to memorise fore example I always forget my family and friends birthday. i can remember month but not day. there is other problem with me. i usually forget what i saied in a conversation. a interested what method you will use in your course. is it useful for me o not? does it work for my rest of life or it is temporary. I work all days eek in morning what time is your course? regards

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does
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