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My housing tenant agreement ended last month, and we don't like to renew the agreement because of distance between office and my old house, so we moved to new flat. My new house is a three room flat, and it is very neat and modern. Inside the house breeze and spacious since it's located at high floor. My house owner has very good taste in arts, so interior looks very nice and pleasant. Compare to my old house this one is more secured because of CCTV camera around the house. Bus stop and MRT are very near to my apartment, it's give convenient options to choose the best one. Wet market and malls are available around the apartment, so shopping also very easy for us. totally I love this new house. I like to invite you to my new house, Coming Sunday if you have time please joins with us with your family.
My housing tenant agreement ended last month, and we don't like to renew the agreement
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neat and modern. Inside the
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breeze and spacious since it's located at high floor. My
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owner has
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taste in arts,
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interior looks
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nice and pleasant. Compare to my
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this one is more secured
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. Bus
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and MRT are
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near to my apartment, it's give convenient options to choose the best one. Wet market and malls are available around the apartment,
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, Coming Sunday if you have time
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