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You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, Complain about the situation Say why this is a problem And propose ways to reduce the noise

You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, Complain about the situation Say why this is a problem And propose ways to reduce the noise VA6D
Dear sir, This is one of your final year student of University's currently residing in old campus building. I am restaurant of new campus that runs till midnight. First of all I'm quite happy for this development of a University. Facilities such as timing really impressed me. S canteen remain open till midnight, which results in unbearable noise of talking, hooting on bikes, sound of vessels etc. I hope you are well aware that our building is pretty near to the canteen. in a residence 90% of the people are of final students. These days we open study at night time, after having long session of extra classes, because next month we all will be giving exams. I request campus authorities should take some serious action such as they can restrict timing only on weekdays aur we can notify other people who are coming there to not to make noise by putting sign boards on walls. I will be very grateful to you if you help us all. I hope you understand the urgency of matter and take corrective measures as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Ameen Jones
Dear sir, This is one of your final year student of University's
currently
residing in
old
campus building. I am restaurant of new campus that runs till midnight.
First of all
I'm quite happy for this development of a University. Facilities such as timing
really
impressed me. S canteen remain open till midnight, which results in unbearable noise of talking, hooting on bikes, sound of vessels etc. I hope you are well aware that our building is pretty near to the canteen.
in
a residence 90% of the
people
are of final students. These days we open study at
night time
, after having long session of extra classes,
because
next
month we all will be giving exams. I request campus authorities should take
some
serious action such as they can restrict timing
only
on weekdays
aur
we can notify other
people
who are coming there
to not to
make
noise by putting
sign
boards on walls. I will be
very
grateful to you if you
help
us all.
I
hope you understand the urgency of matter and take corrective measures as
soon
as possible. Yours
sincerely
,
Ameen
Jones
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IELTS letter You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, Complain about the situation Say why this is a problem And propose ways to reduce the noise

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  American English
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