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You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, Complain about the situation Say why this is a problem And propose ways to reduce the noise

You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, Complain about the situation Say why this is a problem And propose ways to reduce the noise VA6D

Dear sir, This is one of your final year student of University's currently residing in old campus building. I am restaurant of new campus that runs till midnight. First of all I'm quite happy for this development of a University. Facilities such as timing really impressed me. S canteen remain open till midnight, which results in unbearable noise of talking, hooting on bikes, sound of vessels etc. I hope you are well aware that our building is pretty near to the canteen. in a residence 90% of the people are of final students. These days we open study at night time, after having long session of extra classes, because next month we all will be giving exams. I request campus authorities should take some serious action such as they can restrict timing only on weekdays aur we can notify other people who are coming there to not to make noise by putting sign boards on walls. I will be very grateful to you if you help us all. I hope you understand the urgency of matter and take corrective measures as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Ameen Jones

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 a residence 90% of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are of final students. These days we open study at This word is normally spelled as one.nighttime
night time
, after having long session of extra classes, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
next
 month we all will be giving exams. I request campus authorities should take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 serious action such as they can restrict timing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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 we can notify other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who are coming there One 'to' seems to be obsolete.to notnot to
to not to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 noise by putting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :indication
sign
 boards on walls. I will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 grateful to you if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 us all. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope you understand the urgency of matter and take corrective measures as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. Yours sincerely
, Possible spelling mistake found.AmenAmgen
Ameen
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