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You are going on holiday next week and you need to ask your friend to watch your dog while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • state how long you will be away • tell them what needs to be done • state how you will compensate them

You are going on holiday next week and you need to ask your friend to watch your dog while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • state how long you will be away • tell them what needs to be done • state how you will compensate them xLGw
Hey Tim, I’m going to be on vacation next month and I wanted to see if you could take care of my dog while I’m away. As you know, I’ve been thinking about vacationing in Jamaica for a long time. Well, last week I finally took the plunge and decided to book a 2 week trip. I wish I could have booked a longer stay, but that is all the time I could get off work. I would be so thankful if you watched Toto while I was away. He’s a very calm dog and doesn’t require much maintenance. All you will need to do is feed him twice a day and take him on a walk each evening, and there’s plenty of dog food in the house. If you can do this favor for me, I will be happy to take you and your girlfriend out to El Gaucho because I know you love steak. I will even book the VIP room where Brad Pitt and Angelena Jolie dined when they visited Ho Chi Minh City. Let me know if you can help me out with this. Best regards, Joe
Hey Tim,

I’m going to be on vacation
next
month and I wanted to
see
if you could take care of my dog while I’m away.

As you know, I’ve been thinking about vacationing in Jamaica for a long time. Well, last week I
finally
took the plunge and decided to book a
2 week
trip. I wish I could have booked a longer stay,
but
that is
all the time I could
get
off work.

I would be
so
thankful if you
watched
Toto while I was away. He’s a
very
calm dog and doesn’t require much maintenance. All you will need to do
is feed
him twice a day and take him on a walk each evening, and there’s
plenty
of dog food in the
house
.

If you can do this favor for me, I will be happy to take you and your girlfriend out to
El
Gaucho
because
I know you
love
steak. I will even book the VIP room where Brad Pitt and
Angelena
Jolie
dined when they visited Ho Chi Minh City.

Let
me know if you can
help
me out with this.

Best regards,

Joe
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IELTS letter You are going on holiday next week and you need to ask your friend to watch your dog while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • state how long you will be away • tell them what needs to be done • state how you will compensate them

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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