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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part time voluntary unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary unpaid work. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary unpaid work in your letter. Explain why you want to do voluntary unpaid work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful Give details of when you would be available for work.

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part time voluntary unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary unpaid work. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary unpaid work in your letter. Explain why you want to do voluntary unpaid work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful Give details of when you would be available for work. 3l9n
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter as a request for joining the museum for voluntary work. I wanted to be a community servant ever since i moved in this society. As the museum represents the culture and history, it will give me immense satisfaction to work for the great cause that is preserving the culture and historical facets of the society. I have worked as tour guide before so i can assure you that i have the relevant historical knowledge and communication skills to guide and educate a crowd of vistors. I can commit my self to the voluntary service at the museum on Friday and Saturday as i aleardy have a 9 to 5 job on Monday to Thursday. Hoping to hear from you soon about the application. Yours truly, Sameul
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter as a request for joining the museum for voluntary work.

I wanted to be a community servant ever since
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i
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moved
in this society. As the museum represents the culture and history, it will give me immense satisfaction to work for the great cause
that is
preserving the culture and historical facets of the society.

I have worked as tour guide
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
Did you mean "I"?
i
can assure you that
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have the relevant historical knowledge and communication
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
to guide and educate a crowd of
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vistors
.

I can commit my self to the voluntary service at the museum on Friday and Saturday as i
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aleardy
have a 9 to 5 job on Monday to Thursday.

Hoping to hear from you
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soon
about the application.

Yours
truly
,

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Sameul

IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part time voluntary unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary unpaid work. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary unpaid work in your letter. Explain why you want to do voluntary unpaid work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful Give details of when you would be available for work.

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