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You are leaving your job and would like to invite your friend to replace you describe the job explain the reason you are living tell hom /herehy you would recommend the job to them

You are leaving your job and would like to invite your friend to replace you describe the job explain the reason you are living tell hom /herehy you would recommend the job to them L3n06
Dear jayant, I hope you will be fine. As you know I have been working in a guru nank public mullapur school as a teacher on the contrary now I decided I should leave this because of my dream owing to the fact that I want to go abroad for my better future anyway I will discuss whole things that why I want to leave this job as well as I want give chance to you for this job through this letter. Let me explain about my pervious job, as I mention I am teacher I teach to social sci subjects to 6th to 8th of students in fact I like to teach the students if they tell about the staff all mentor of this are extremely friendly as well as students has coprative. However, now I give a ielts exam for full fill my dream consequently during my work I can manage both of the work together so I decided I should leave this job. I know you also had completed master in s. s t subjects consequently I believe that you have eligible for this work. If you interested for if please tell me. I am look forward to waiting from your answer. Your sincerely.
Dear
jayant
,

I hope you will be fine. As you know I have been working in a guru
nank
public
mullapur
school as a teacher
on the contrary
now
I decided I should
leave
this
because
of my dream owing to the fact that I want to go abroad for my better future anyway I will discuss whole things that why I want to
leave
this job
as well
as I want give chance to you for this job through this letter.

Let
me
explain
about my
pervious
job, as I mention I am teacher I teach to social sci subjects
to 6th to
8th of students in fact I like to teach the students if they
tell
about the staff all mentor of this are
extremely
friendly
as well
as students has
coprative
.

However
,
now
I give
a
ielts
exam for full fill my dream
consequently
during my work I can manage both of the work together
so
I decided I should
leave
this job.

I know you
also
had completed master in s. s t subjects
consequently
I believe that you have eligible for this work. If you
interested for
if
please
tell
me. I am look forward to waiting from your answer. Your
sincerely
.
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IELTS letter You are leaving your job and would like to invite your friend to replace you describe the job explain the reason you are living tell hom /herehy you would recommend the job to them

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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