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TOUR GUIDES NEEDED We need a hard-working team of people to work as tour guides throughout the summer period. A good knowledge of your local area is required as well as the ability to get on well with people. If you are at least 18 years old, write to us and tell us about your character and interests. We would also like you to say what you think is one of the highlights of your area and why.

TOUR GUIDES NEEDED We need a hard-working team of people to work as tour guides throughout the summer period. A good knowledge of your local area is required as well as the ability to get on well with people. If you are at least 18 years old, write to us and tell us about your character and interests. We would also like you to say what you think is one of the highlights of your area and why. gqVwA

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the tour guide position. I saw it in the advertisement in front of the supermarket when I was shopping yesterday afternoon. I am 20 years old and I am a senior at Da Nang University of Foreign Languages. I've been living in the city for years, so I'm confident that I know enough about this place. I can speak two languages fluently: Vietnamese and English, and I know a little bit about Japanese. Also, I'm often evaluated as a sociable, cheerful person by those around me. In particular, I have great teamwork skills and can be calm under any situation. Last but not least, I can organize jobs in a systematic manner. I am extremely keen on this job because it will both encourage my dream of becoming a tour guide and allow me to study. I believe I would be a good fit for this tour guide position. I hope my application will receive your favorable consideration. Yours faithfully,

Dear Sir or Madam,

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 it in the advertisement in front of the supermarket when I was shopping yesterday afternoon.

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enough
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often
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, I have great teamwork This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and can be calm under any situation. Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, I can organize jobs Consider replacing "in a systematic manner" with the adverb for "systematic"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a systematic manner
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I am extremely
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because
 it will both encourage my dream of becoming a tour guide and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to study. I believe I would be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 fit for this tour guide position.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope my application will receive your favorable consideration.

Yours faithfully
, 