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Writing a cover letter to hiring manager

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Although I am very young, Shin & Kim Hanoi is my dream worksite, which is a nutritious and friendly environment to develop my ability. I strongly connect with Shin & Kim Hanoi through your diverse field that is full of professional lawyers and attorneys, rich experience-based legal services in good faith by clients, good compensation and energetic, friendly environments that a number of young students like me aim to work here. After researching about your firm and your internship program, I notice that it is an honor to work and study with you. I am attracted to this particular position because its nature strongly resonates with my desire. Although I am inexperienced, I have tried my best in studying and nourishing my abilities through joining an academic club, writing an academic paper and enhancing my knowledge in my favorite subjects. Therefore I can envision my best self realized through this internship program. In the last two years, my studying scope was about a variety of laws such as civil law, land law, v. v. Specifically, I am into researching Corporate law. That is the reason why I had gotten good marks in two writing essays (I got my essays score of 9), which rarely students could get it. Besides that, I had a good score in other subjects, such as Intellectual property Law. In the nearest semester, known as semester 2 of second-year, I had gotten 3. 69, which is the highest score in the class. It was proof that my hard work had paid off. Furthermore, I believe my biggest leverage setting me apart is my ability to learn quickly, writing and research when being a student. In this time, I also develop my skills in Microsoft Office and enhance my English skills to be perfect. I hope my CV and this letter find you well. I am looking forward to speaking to you very soon to discuss how I can bring tangible value to Shin & Kim Hanoi when playing an intern role. Best regards, Thu-Quynh Vu.
Although I am
very
young, Shin & Kim Hanoi is my dream worksite, which is a nutritious and friendly environment to develop my ability. I
strongly
connect with Shin & Kim Hanoi through your diverse field
that is
full of professional lawyers and attorneys, rich experience-based legal services in
good
faith by clients,
good
compensation and energetic, friendly environments that a number of young students like me aim to work here. After researching about your firm and your internship program, I notice that it is an honor to work and study with you.

I
am attracted
to this particular position
because
its nature
strongly
resonates with my desire. Although I
am inexperienced
, I have tried my best in studying and nourishing my abilities through joining an academic club, writing an academic paper and enhancing my knowledge in my favorite subjects.

Therefore
I can envision my best self realized through this internship program. In the last two years, my studying scope was about a variety of
laws
such as civil
law
, land
law
, v. v.
Specifically
, I am into researching Corporate
law
.
That is
the reason why I had gotten
good
marks in two writing essays (I
got
my essays score of 9), which rarely students could
get
it.
Besides
that, I had a
good
score in other subjects, such as Intellectual property
Law
. In the nearest semester, known as semester 2 of second-year, I had gotten 3. 69, which is the highest score in the
class
. It was proof that my
hard
work had paid off.

Furthermore
, I believe my biggest leverage setting me apart is my ability to learn
quickly
, writing and research when being a student. In this time, I
also
develop my
skills
in Microsoft Office and enhance my English
skills
to be perfect.

I hope my CV and this letter find you well. I am looking forward to speaking to you
very
soon
to discuss how I can bring tangible value to Shin & Kim Hanoi when playing an intern role.

Best regards,

Thu-Quynh
Vu
.
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IELTS letter Writing a cover letter to hiring manager

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7 paragraphs
339 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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