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write a christmas letter for your parents

write a christmas letter for your parents WgBBe
dear mommy and daddy, i hope this is another good beginning for you. May you be richly blessed with a successful new year. May my sincere blessings suround spend travel of your life. Love, Peace and Joy will come to and make you happy and cheerful. May Christmas spread cheer in your life. i hope this is another good beginning for you. May you be richly blessed with a successful new year. May my sincere blessings suround spend travel of your life. Love, Peace and Joy will come to and make you happy and cheerful. May Christmas spread cheer in your life
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dear
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mommy
and
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daddy
,
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i
hope this is another
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good
beginning for you. May you be
richly
blessed with a successful new year. May my sincere blessings
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suround
spend travel of your
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life
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love
, Peace and Joy will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
you happy and cheerful. May Christmas spread cheer in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
hope this is another
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
beginning for you. May you be
richly
blessed with a successful new year. May my sincere blessings
Possible spelling mistake found.
suround
spend travel of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love
, Peace and Joy will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
you happy and cheerful. May Christmas spread cheer in your
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
life
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IELTS letter write a christmas letter for your parents

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
101 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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