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Can you help me by describing the sort of weekend jobs teenagers do in your country, any problems they have and how people find part-time jobs?

Can you help me by describing the sort of weekend jobs teenagers do in your country, any problems they have and how people find part-time jobs? 6KBw3

Hi RoseThanks for your letter, I am glad to hear that you are good. In my country, a weekend jobs are pretty popular and it is quite easy to look out for it. Because of the education system, we just go to school in the morning or afternoon. Then, we have enough time to do a part time jobs and a salary is pretty fine. In contrast, a teenagers also have some matter about the jobs. Forr example, they have to do a grat deal of work than they might expect, such as: washing dishes for a several hours. Accordingly, they need to balance between work and school. To be honestly, I have done the weekend job since I was in grade 10. That was a terrible time for me as I need to wash a pile of dishes and bowls a day. Moreover, a owner always complain all things and I am convinced that the teenagers would be depressed. In general, I believe that after doing a weekend jobs which have provided you a lot of in-depth knowledge about the things you have ever done. In my view, we are currently live in the country which have a technology equipment like: smart phone, television, . . . Therefore, it turns out to be easily to find the jobs you want. For instance, we are totally capable of getting the jobs through advisements on the internet or engage groups which usually post employment information. I literally hope it will be more convenient for your project. Best wishes, Ninia.

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