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Letter of application should be written all information

Letter of application should be written all information VPGe7
Dear Sir I am writing to inform you that I would like to apply as a valunteer for helping international sports event. I am a student of world languages university at the same time a am a good sportsman, this event not only helps me to enrich my knowladge in the sphere of sport but also my language skills too. Furthermore, I have suffecent experience to attend the compitation as a valunteer, for example every summer I take part in the summer teenagers' compitation in the capital of our republic. Moreover, I am tolerantat the same time extramly easygoing person, and every difficulties I can solve with wisedom. In addition, I have comunicational skills, as I can communicate with even rude person. Atteched my resume will prowide you with additional information about my qualifications. I have complated your online application, there all my contact information have been written, feel free if you want contact with me. Thank you for your considration. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faicefully Dilshod Navruzov
Dear Sir

I am writing to inform you that I would like to apply as a
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valunteer
for helping international sports
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event
.

I am a student of world
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "languages'" or "language's"?
languages
university at the same time
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a
am a
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good
sportsman, this
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event
not
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only
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helps
me to enrich my
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knowladge
in the sphere of sport
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but
also
my language
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skills
too.
Furthermore
, I have
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suffecent
experience to attend the
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compitation
as a
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valunteer
,
for example
every summer I
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take part
in the summer
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teenagers
'
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compitation
in the capital of our republic.
Moreover
, I am
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tolerantat
the same time
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extramly
easygoing person, and every
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difficulties
I can solve with
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wisedom
.
In addition
, I have
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comunicational
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
, as I can communicate with even rude person.

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Atteched
my resume will
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prowide
you with additional information about my qualifications. I have
Possible spelling mistake found.
complated
your online application, there all my contact information have
been written
, feel free if you want contact with me. Thank you for your
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considration
. I look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
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faicefully
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Dilshod
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Navruzov
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IELTS letter Letter of application should be written all information

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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