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You are leaving your job and would like to invite your friend as your replacement. Write about 1) Why are you leaving 2) Job description 3) Why would your friend enjoy working there

You are leaving your job and would like to invite your friend as your replacement. Write about 1) Why are you leaving 2) Job description 3) Why would your friend enjoy working there 7a3B2
Dear Bacon, How are you? Hope this letter bring you good health. I’m leaving my current job and I would like you to take my position as a project manager in my current company Nishtha Institute. I was searching for a new job and I got selected in Oracle corporation with promotion and high wages. So, I resigned my current work and I’ll be joining my new company in a month. Moreover, the new company has a more challenging task which I was waiting for so long time to prove my talent. My current role is a project manager and my company requested me to find a suitable candidate for my replacement. It’s also a challenging role, as it requires both technical knowledge and management skill to deal effectively with the team, top management and customer. In addition, it’ll require dedication and problem-solving skill to decide and take appropriate step to resolve the issue. I hope you are looking for such kind of job and it’ll be a promotion for you from testing lead to project manager role with a hike in your salary as well. Also, you have excellent knowledge in this field and administration as well, so you can enjoy working here. I hope you will accept this offer and achieve your goals. Awaiting to see your response to this proposal. Best wishes Saru
Dear Bacon,

How are you? Hope this letter bring you
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health. I’m leaving my
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current
job and I would like you to take my position as a project manager in my
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current
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company
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Nishtha
Institute.

I was searching for a new job and I
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got
selected in Oracle corporation with promotion and high wages.
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So
, I resigned my
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current
work and I’ll be joining my new
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company
in a month.
Moreover
, the new
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company
has a more challenging task which I was waiting for
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so
long time to prove my talent.

My
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current
role is a project manager and my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
requested me to find a suitable candidate for my replacement. It’s
also
a challenging role, as it requires both technical knowledge and management
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skill
to deal
effectively
with the team, top management and customer.
In addition
, it’ll require dedication and problem-solving
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skill
to decide and take appropriate step to resolve the issue.

I hope you are looking for such kind of job and it’ll be a promotion for you from testing lead to project manager role with a hike in your salary
as well
.
Also
, you have excellent knowledge in this field and administration
as well
,
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so
you can enjoy working here. I hope you will accept this offer and achieve your goals.

Awaiting to
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see
your response to this proposal.

Best wishes

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Saru
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IELTS letter You are leaving your job and would like to invite your friend as your replacement. Write about 1) Why are you leaving 2) Job description 3) Why would your friend enjoy working there

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7 paragraphs
225 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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