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write a letter to the singer. in your letter say how u feel about perf

write a letter to the singer. in your letter say how u feel about perf wBOYr

Dear Mr. Jackie, I am writing this letter to you attending your concert in London last week. I am your biggest fan and it was a dream come true moment for me. The reason I am expressing my feeling here is your performance on the stage was a heart-touching experience. Which made the crowd, including me dance relentlessly. I felt your energy how you sang and create an entertaining atmosphere for everyone. However, the show finished soon, but it was a pleasure to see you live. I would like to share with you my musical interest that is playing guitar. Even though I have been playing for 3 years but could not reach your level. In spite of a lot of practice, I am still lacking in a few areas. Kindly help me to improve my musical skills so that I can perform better. If you can provide me some personal classes in your studio, I will grateful to you. I hope you do the needful. Yours Sincerely.

Dear Mr. Jackie,

I am writing this letter to you attending your concert in London ‘last week’ indicates a finished event of the past. Please check the predicate's tense.
last week
. I am your biggest fan and it was a dream This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 true moment for me.

The reason I am expressing my feeling here is your performance on the stage was a heart-touching experience.  Which made the crowd, including me dance relentlessly
. I felt your energy how you sang and create an entertaining atmosphere for everyone.  However
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 finished This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it was a pleasure to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
.

I would like to share with you my musical interest that is
 playing guitar. Even though
 I have been playing for 3 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 could not reach your level. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
In spite of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 practice, I am still
 lacking in a few areas.

Kindly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 my musical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can perform better. If you can provide me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 personal classes in your studio, I It seems that a verb or adverb has been misspelled or is missing here.will be gratefulwill have grateful
will grateful
 to you.

I hope you do the needful.

Yours Sincerely
. 